The feedback I have received from my peers really helped me understand what i needed to work on. They had told me to work on my citations. I have quotes in my essay but i did not cite them properly. Another feedback they had given me was about my thesis. My thesis can be a stronger thesis if i work on it a little more. My peers certainly liked specific information i provided in my essay from the book The Climate Casino. I gave details on what can be done to help get New York City prepared. I defiantly want to concentrate more on my thesis and conclusion. I think i should plan out my structure more and really work on the flow of my essay. My biggest concern on this essay is the overall message I'm trying to portray. i want my letter to the mayor to be very informative on why I think New York City is not ready for climate change. Also I'm concerned on whether or not i will get an A. I feel as if in class we can maybe learn more about the structure of the essay and how each detail can flow into the next detail.